Another great piece of P4 artwork, this is up there with early Yamato, work for quality. It has a rich oil painting look to it.
The lighting despite not matching what you were after, looks perfect to me (the viewer).
I think your
Dork, is coming along just great, he looks the perfect steampunk gentleman, like the attire.
I guess I'd only change the gun for something bigger, for the work you had him do here, even scaling it up a little.
Daz3D have a permanently free, suitable steampunk gun here, with templates (under Resource File) direct link;
http://www.daz3d.com/free-3d-models...ia-kruger-mk-15
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I've found that to do well with any figure you really need to have a passion for that figure,
...and I hope you develop that passion for yours.