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Short Stories - a poem



messenger [ Monday, 08 November 2004, 06:31 PM ]
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Night time torture <br /> <br /> As I walk through the vallley of despair, and climb the mountain of lonliness <br /> The mists of chaos confuse my thoughts <br /> I turn and seek to find if one follows me there but no one is to be found <br /> Restlessness invades my body, and I tumble and toss, but to no avail <br /> The sweet slumber of sleep eludes me, and wakefullness abounds <br /> The night sounds echo around my room, each seeming louder than the one before <br /> Screeching tyres, slamming doors and even the sound of someones snores, <br /> I punch my pillow, I try a drink, but nothing works I am still awake, <br /> What did I do to deserve this I cry, my bed now an instrument of torture, the blankets awry, <br /> The sheets full of wrinkles, my mind tortures me with thoughts of things past, <br /> And some not yet done, <br /> And wait, there through the blinds I see....Oh no its the glimmer of sun <br /> For me the night is not yet over, yet the morning has begun <br /> The start of a new day sees me tired and weary, with eyes looking bloodshot and bleary, <br /> But at least a new hope now dawns, maybe tonight I will sleep deep and sound, <br /> And awake tomorrow to greet the dawn with a smile on my face and not a frown.
Tormie [ Monday, 08 November 2004, 10:08 PM ]
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<img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/biggrin.gif" alt="" /> Thank you for having posted something here messenger!! This place was full of webs <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_shifty.gif" alt="" /> ... I need my little dictionary to translate you poem and I will comment it later <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/smile.gif" alt="" />
messenger [ Monday, 08 November 2004, 10:19 PM ]
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your very welcome tormie
TdaC [ Monday, 08 November 2004, 10:32 PM ]
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Thanks for sharing your poem, it was felt very true and real. <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" />
Den Tracy [ Tuesday, 09 November 2004, 01:00 PM ]
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Everyone has had a night or nights like the one in the poem. <br /> Well written, Angie. <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <br /> <br /> There is an abundance of different talents here, to say the very least
Paul Mon [ Tuesday, 09 November 2004, 01:04 PM ]
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Damn Angie...how did you know I had a sleepless night on Monday? <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> Sums it up. Great words <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/heartbeat.gif" alt="" />
RedHawk [ Tuesday, 09 November 2004, 01:07 PM ]
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<img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> <br /> I'm not usually a big poetry fan, but I really enjoyed this! <br /> Thanks! <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/notworthy.gif" alt="" />
messenger [ Tuesday, 09 November 2004, 04:16 PM ]
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thanks everyone....gosh paul didn't you know that I know everything.....at least that is what my hubby says... <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/lol.gif" alt="" />
Tormie [ Tuesday, 09 November 2004, 06:11 PM ]
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I enjoied it a lot <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" /> ! Tahnk you Messenger <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/smile.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/smile.gif" alt="" /> <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/smile.gif" alt="" /> !!
Ozymandias Jones [ Wednesday, 10 November 2004, 03:53 AM ]
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Well written, captures the moment. <br /> <br /> Thanks for sharing with us <img src="https://www.posetteforever.com/images/smiles/eusa_clap.gif" alt="" />


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