She look interesting, but I would to have eaten a a lot of garlic and have some holy water ready before I met up with her.
One item that you may want to work on is her eyes. In the close up sample, they work, but in the full body rendering they look as thoug she is wearing grey eye makeup and her eyes are closed. Depending on how your are planning to use her, perhaps a little demonic glowing eyes effect could help. Also on her skin, you might want to reduce the strength of the highlights jsut a little bit. Assuming that they are on a different layer than the base skin pigment, I would reduce the highlight layer's visibility by about 10% to maybe 15%. But of course that all depends on the sort of look you are trying for.
Pangor